Beginnings and Woes
For many moons, I railed against the first-person point of view. That might have been influenced by Beverly Cleary, who used it to great effect in the children’s books that filled my youth. I associated first-person narrative with books directed at kids … and Victorian gothic tales, which are in many ways similar to children’s literature. (Don’t @ me. I specialized in Victorian Lit at university and I won’t be swayed in my opinion that those books are basically great, sweeping, gory morality tales. And I love them for that.)
When it came to what we’ll call popular modern adult fiction, though, my experiences with first-person POV were disappointing. What I read of it felt “shove-y”, like a teenager in desperate want of attention. Characters who wouldn’t shut up in their own heads, telling me what they were feeling all the damn time. In my own attention-grabbing behavior, I ended up throwing more than one book across the room because of it.
I realize now I was simply reading the wrong first-person POV books. Bad first-person POV books. Really, really bad ones.
Around 2010, I became interested in detective stories. I’d always enjoyed police procedurals, and I’ve always wanted to write a detective story. The problem is, I’m not smart enough to come up with a crime to baffle a detective who’s reasonably good at their job. So, I started watching – and reading – the books on which some of my favorite TV detectives were based. At the time, that was Longmire and Inspector George Gently.
Craig Johnston (Longmire) and Alan Hunter (Inspector George Gently) are wonderful writers. It’s no wonder A&E (later Netflix) and BBC picked up their stories for televised popularization. Their writing is lively, witty, and, at its best, capable of lifting the reader out of their own self and into the lives of the characters on the page. And many of Hunter’s and all of Johnston’s stories are written in first-person! Due to my enjoyment of those series, I actively sought out other detective stories in the same vein. That’s when I discovered perhaps the greatest first-person crime novels of all time: Ross Macdonald and his weary but dogged private detective, Lew Archer.
My life as a reader and as a writer has not been the same since.
Macdonald’s prose practically sings off the page into my head with every line. I’ve caught myself laughing aloud to Archer’s snappy repartee. Lew feels like a real man with real desires, hang-ups, and ambitions fulfilled and lost. The stories make me love being a reader, being able to enjoy a master – undisputed in my mind – working their craft. As a writer, the books inspire me to examine what I put down on my own pages, to write with clarity and purpose but never by sacrificing honesty and genuineness in the characters. I’ve found myself going back and re-reading all of the Lew Archer books multiple times, not just for the enjoyment factor but because each reading offers me new insight into craft, skill, and the characteristics of the first-person perspective.
When I read Ross Macdonald, I want to write as well as Ross Macdonald did. That’s not going to happen, but it’s a worthy goal. And every time I pick up my pen or open my laptop, I take that challenge to heart and try to put my best work forward. I’m even thinking of giving my own first-person noir a try.
What’s your take on first-person POV? Do you have a story that changed your mind one way or another? Let me know!
I heartily agree with you about the annoying voice of first-person protagonists in many books. I find this to be especially true in YA and chick lit. I tried writing in first-person, and I managed a short story, but I haven’t been tempted since. I like to write in prose, and somehow I haven’t found the right character to do that through a first-person perspective.
I don’t read much crime, so I’ve never had the honor of reading the above authors. But you’ve sung their praises so wonderfully, I’m adding them to my reading list!
Having also read some downright un-readable drudgery written in the 1st person POV, I can completely understand where you´re coming from. Its a form of writing I´ve only ever toyed with occasionally, but there has to be a character I can really meld with.
I´d personally love to read a 1st-person noir if it comes from your pen, even if a simple one-off experiment. I like how you´ve taken Macdonald as not only an inspiration, but also a challenge to expand your creativity!
Hey, Kate, thanks for stopping by!
My less-than-savory experiences with first-person POVs were in a few popular YA books at the time. It’s what sadly turned me off of the genre as a whole. I know that’s something I need to work on, but I have to do it at my own pace. I agree with a lot of the comments on your Facebook group, that the feasibility of first-person POV has a direct link to the particular character. The perspective has to match the voice!
While the books I talk about are technically crime novels, they’re not (usually) as dark as a lot of the books popular in that genre. Most of the time, they deal with murder and crimes, but they have a strong dose of fun, adventure, and sardonic wit. There are no grisly torture scenes described play-by-play, for instance.
Thanks for dropping in to share your thoughts, Chase!
I totally agree that there has to be a particular connection with a character for me to attempt first-person POV. It is not a universal option.
Macdonald’s Lew Archer books are hands-down my favorites. <3 There's something in his style and technique – as well as the way the character develops and ages over the course of the books – that has really resonated with me. Archer is such a complete character, in fact, that I can only ever see him as the way Macdonald wrote him; no room for my own fanfiction-y take!