100 Word Challenge for Grown-Ups

It’s week 43 for the 100-Word Challenge for Grown-Ups (100WCGU)! The prompt this week is:

“…The flame flickered before…”

I wrote this one quickly – on my 20-minute morning train – but I quite like it. Usually, I fret over the words much more than I did with this one. I don’t know if that means I’m getting better at writing these, or if I “hear” the voices of my Songbirds so much more clearly than the voices of other characters, or if the prompt just worked out right for me, this week. Whatever the reason, I hope you enjoy!

“That Unexpected Spark”

Flame Kiss by Martin Eftimov, fractalsandwords.blogspot.com

Flame Kiss, by Martin Eftimov

She didn’t know when it happened, only that it wouldn’t let her go.

Perhaps, it had begun in the old DVD store, when she’d first seen his lopsided smile. Or in the library, when he’d sat beside her, listening to a history of angels. Or in that moment of desperate terror, when she’d thought everything hopeless…and then felt his arms surround her.

Or, perhaps, it happened the first time she kissed him: an unexpected spark of feeling for a friend who could be something more.

The flame flickered before, but that kiss had made it flare.

Sally wouldn’t have wanted it any other way.

Other writers I follow always seem to be able to do so much more with those 100 words than I can do. I suppose it’s just my style, that I tell things slowly? Regardless, I enjoy these challenges, and I look forward to more. (I just wish I could write like other people, sometimes.)

How did you interpret the idea of a flickering flame?

Log in here!